Thursday, April 2, 2009

Year 4 Group Narratives

Star Studio Setup

By Tom, Jenna & Carla


It was just anther ordinary day at Hobart Primary School until the boss of Star Studio Anthony came into my neat and tidy classroom. “We are having a competition” explained Anthony. “I have hidden a blue sparkling bag in your school ground, with equipment in it. When you find it, take it to Star Studio and you will get a reward.” Chris the mean bully and I (Michael) decided to take up the challenge.

Just as Anthony finished explaining the rules the recess bell rang and we were led out to the noisy playground. Just as I was about to eat my recess alone, Chris stormed up to me. As he started to threaten me, we saw Anthony suspiciously speaking on his cool, slick phone, on the way to his car.

Chris was staring at Anthony without blinking, so I sneakily crept away. When recess finished we forwarded into class. As I looked back at Chris he stuck out his tongue at me.

At lunch I decided to look for the blue sparkling bag. I looked everywhere except for one place........THE GIRLS TOILETS!! As I rushed in, hoping no one was in there I found the bag under the sink. “BEEP BEEP!!” “Were did that came from?” I said to myself curiously. My instincts told me to look up. The noise was coming from a shinny, brand new video camera.

The next sunny day, I went back into the girls toilets to see if it was still there... it was. I grabbed the video camera and started to fiddle with it. On the side of the video camera I saw the Star Studio logo. I snuck out of school, and caught a taxi to Star Studio.

“I’ve done it, I found the blue sparkling bag!” I said in relief. “But what’s this video camera for?” “What camera?” asked the taxi driver. “Well... it’s a long story...”I told him After I finished explaining the story, the taxi driver said “It’s all a set up, I know it, I’ve seen it all before”. “Are you sure?” I asked “POSTIVE!!” Then we arrived at Star Studio. I ran inside and yelled “I FOUND IT, I FOUND IT!! With the taxi driver behind me talking on his phone. ”You did?” said Anthony. “I DID! SEE!” I exclaimed. “But what is in your other hand? “Anthony said. “Just a video camera it must be yours”. I said “I’ll take that said Anthony sneaking the camera in his pocket. “Just wait right there!” Yelled the taxi driver. A line of offices formed behind him. “I’ll take that”, said one of the police man in a deep voice. A few minutes later the police man said “You’re under arrest. Come with me! “But, But I didn’t”. Anthony said worried. “Tell it to the Judge!” and they took him away. But, but”. I said confused. “Don’t worry it’s all OK”. Said the taxi driver happily.

1 comment:

curtisfamily said...

What a great story. well done to Carla, Tom and Jenna. You must have very clever parents..especially your mums...ha ha!!