Year 4 Group Narratives

Visiting Aunty Jane

By Alyssa, Rachael & Beatrice

As Andrew walked to the front door of Aunty Jane’s house. Jane opened the door and Andrew scurried in. Andrew walked to the room he normally stays in and discovered an old cupboard.

Just as Andrew was about to inspect what was in the cupboard “Andrew dinners ready” Aunty Jane sang out. Aunty Jane got cross with Andrew for not eating his peas and Andrew ran off crying to his room. When he reached his room Andrew wanted to hide from Aunty Jane so he went into the old cupboard and fell backwards. When he stood up he found himself in front of a HAUNTED HOUSE.

Andrew walked along the hallway till he reached a door. He opened the door, entered the room and the door shut with a loud bang and turned into another wall.

Andrew was so scared! He wondered how he would get out. He heard a faint BOOO. As Andrew got closer he heard BOOO getting louder. “AHHH” he screamed, “What is that” he whispered to himself. Andrew saw a bright light coming closer to him, but he couldn’t work out what it might be. At that very moment he realised what it was! “AAAAAHHHHHHHH” he screamed “A GHOST” he yelled. Then the ghost disappeared at the sound of Andrews screaming. “What just happened?” He thought to himself.

Andrew walked into another mysterious room. In the room, Andrew saw a closet. He was about to reach for the handles but at that very moment a monster popped out and scared the living day lights out of him. Andrew was so scared that he could only squeak. “What you scream for?” said the monster. “You’re not going to eat me?” Andrew said in surprise. “Eat you? No way!” the monster said laughing. “Need help?” asked the monster. “Well I need to get out of this…this… monster house.” He replied. “That easy” the monster said in a silly voice. “You can do that” Andrew said excitedly, with a smile on his face. It took him a while, but the monster lead him to a cupboard that looked the same as his Aunty Jane’s. So they said Good bye and Andrew opened the door and left without a word.

Andrew decided to go talk to his Aunty Jane. “I am sorry for not finishing my dinner” said Andrew. “I am sorry for getting angry at you confessed Aunty Jane “I accept your apology” they said together.